Omg I love this game so much, I can’t wait for it to be complete! I keep coming back here to check for any updates, my anxiety is going to kill me lol. Oh, and I’d like to ask something—would you be interested in a Portuguese translation? I don’t see many Portuguese translations around here, which is kind of sad considering it’s my native language, and there are so many Portuguese speakers here on itch.io... Well, if you're interested, just let me know. I’ve translated games before, so I have a good sense of things. (I'm translating rn the game What I wouldnt do) Again, I love your game <333
yeah i agree, i got this feedback a lot + some great code to implement the warnings in game too, it'll be implemented at the next update when i finish the angel room, ty for your feedback <33
I played this back in, like, March and fell in love with 404 and I was so excited to see another monster out when I remembered to check in on the game! I absolutely love Sir Knight, his personality being silly and mean in the perfect way, and I can't wait to see the other two monsters. as it stands, though, Sir Knight has definitely been added to my list of fictional husbands, alongside 404. <3
i like this game. Nauseaxe_404 is cool as hell but i have do admit i quite like sir knight a lot too. a knight wight with a biker helmet and a rifle...i FU * * LOVE that!! i wish there'd be more interactions with 404 and knight, but we have to be patient i guess.^^ the musics are just perfect, especialy sir knight ones.
ПРОСТО АХУЕННАЯ ИГРА!!! кхм, мне очень понравиось, я в целом люблю визуальные новеллы, тащусь по рыцарям и раньше увлекалась писательством, пока что всё выглядит бесподобно! автор продолжай в том же духе :)
I REALLY need the other two rooms, I want so badly to play with the angel and the clown, I hope they don't take too long because I want to see their designs! 😭
Had a great time playing! Happy I went for the purple room before going to the red room...which was surprisingly 'easier'? Looking forward to the rest!
NauseAxe_404 is the babygirliest babygirl ever, I love him. He did kill me a couple of times but everybody does that sometimes! AHA...aha....ah.... no, maybe nobody does. HE IS STILL POOKIE TO ME!
Can't wait to play more when the other two rooms will be available! Another game I'm excited to see the future of!
how do i download this game on my macbook bc all that shows up is a anime girl and when i click on her it says its not verified and i have to put it in the trash 😔
Ok. I have quite a bit to say. This game is good. I'm gonna be a bit negative in this review, but I need to make it clear that I quite liked the experience here. It's nice, the monsters feel genuine and they're fun to play around with. In that vein, I don't really have anything to complain about 001's route. It's just a good time.
004 tho. Yeah. I have some things to get off my chest, it wasn't good. The route is long, and the ending doesn't really feel as satisfying as it could have been. Allow me to elaborate: the buildup is weird. It's long, and the knight is a bit *too* trigger happy. This isn't really a problem on it's own, but coming off from the sweet and short 001 it is quite jarring just how much harder 004 is. This isn't a big problem on it's own, but there is also the payoff of all that buildup, where it is revealed that you are a reincarnation (I think?) of the knight's master. The issue? What was the point of everything else if you were just the master all along.
Your choices didn't really matter here up to this point, past the ending it felt like you as a player is just thrown from one scene into the other until the game decides that you have won the lottery and you're actually his master. In a game that markets itself with "from blackmailing to flirting anything is fair game" you have surprisingly little say on how to deal with him. It would be better if you could convince him through helping him process the death of his master, or through a newfound passion for cooking, or - here's an idea - instead of straight up killing you when you make a perfect armor maybe it would send you down another route where you gaslight him into thinking you're the master when you're really not. It would be better if the sword was scrapped altogether, just *something* to make you feel like you did something, that makes you feel like, you know, an actual mediator. For now, the lingering aftertaste that the chapter leaves in your mouth is that you got lucky, and luck doesn't really feel good.
Both monsters so far have been solved mostly through who you are rather than something you do. For 001 I can forgive it, since he doesn't really overstay his welcome and it's playing into a very specific fantasy, but it should be a one off thing. Unless there is another route for the knight I'm not aware (and if there is, please tell me), it being solved the same way makes me worried for the game's future and the direction it is going. I bring this up because there is a lot of potential here, again this is not a bad game by any means. But it can be improved. I hope you take this the best way possible, but 004 is frustrating when it didn't really need to be.
thank you for your feedback! and don't worry any criticism is welcome especially if it's respectful like yours, most of your feedback if not all of it stems from the fact i create the games the way i want them to (in a selfish way you could say), i write and create the dialogue and options according to whatever my brain wants to do at the moment, the result can vary in terms of how other players will experience the route, you're also not the first one to get frustrated with 004s route after playing 001, i did make Sir Knight harder on purpose, although he's supposed to be the 2nd hardest (404 < Angel < Sir Knight < The Clown), i know i probably should have done the angel first then but i really really wanted to make him lmao, i was in the 004 zone ✨
for the other feedback in terms of story i don't plan on changing anything since it'll all come together at the end (the fact that mc seems to always have some sort of connection to all of the monsters, but ill make a post about that on twitter at some point once I continue with the angel), your own proposals wouldn't fit canon 004 at all tbh (although you can headcanon whatever you want ofc), and I don't write my characters and stories according to what i believe would be most enjoyable to play through, but what i personally wanna see in the game, so future routes and games might still be frustrating in that regard especially because everyone has their own preferences, either way im always open for feedback or criticism because some feedback HAS changed how i go about things (feedback for my TWs for example hehe), and regardless of whether i change anything im always curious to hear what people feel after playing my games, good and bad
con el caballero morí tantas veces que cada que hablaba me resigne a morir, cuando ya no me mato, me sentí un tanto rara XD, estaba como: a caray no me mori? de hecho hasta me decepcione :v pero también fui feliz cuando llegue viva al final :D
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О ДАААААА ДУШИ МЕНЯ, HeadLocker!!!!!! ДУШИ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Omg I love this game so much, I can’t wait for it to be complete! I keep coming back here to check for any updates, my anxiety is going to kill me lol. Oh, and I’d like to ask something—would you be interested in a Portuguese translation? I don’t see many Portuguese translations around here, which is kind of sad considering it’s my native language, and there are so many Portuguese speakers here on itch.io... Well, if you're interested, just let me know. I’ve translated games before, so I have a good sense of things. (I'm translating rn the game What I wouldnt do) Again, I love your game <333
nah fr though xd
I LOVED IT
it was absolutely amazing, knight is so cool too!
litteraly cant wait for the update with new stuff
This game changed my life.
Also if you're interested I could do like a German translation ;)
me too but I only know Chinese and Vietnamese..
I love love love this game, I'm obsessed. Need both of them,
simultaneously.Did they have to be this hot
HeadLocker:THANK YOU FOR DOWNLOADING MY GAME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <3
I will kiss your liver.
: I know I'm Bi but no thank you
ok fine kissing your kidney then
Hey great game, but it would probably be for the best if the warning for the sexual assault was more visible on the page! Its kind of easy to miss
yeah i agree, i got this feedback a lot + some great code to implement the warnings in game too, it'll be implemented at the next update when i finish the angel room, ty for your feedback <33
I played this back in, like, March and fell in love with 404 and I was so excited to see another monster out when I remembered to check in on the game! I absolutely love Sir Knight, his personality being silly and mean in the perfect way, and I can't wait to see the other two monsters. as it stands, though, Sir Knight has definitely been added to my list of fictional husbands, alongside 404. <3
AN IDIOT SAYS WHA-
*Proceed to get slaughtered by gun knight man Ụ^U*
I'm curious about 404&sk 's birthday...🤔
The game is amazing!! I really hope there is a translation for the game in Portuguese (Brazil) to make it easier to understand everything😭
I love this game!! The designs are great and the music fits very well. I can't wait to see the other rooms!!
It's so much fun!It's so much fun! It's a shame that the play time is short, but it was that interesting. Especially, the characters were so good~!!
i like this game. Nauseaxe_404 is cool as hell but i have do admit i quite like sir knight a lot too. a knight wight with a biker helmet and a rifle...i FU * * LOVE that!! i wish there'd be more interactions with 404 and knight, but we have to be patient i guess.^^ the musics are just perfect, especialy sir knight ones.
Why palmiers?
ПРОСТО АХУЕННАЯ ИГРА!!! кхм, мне очень понравиось, я в целом люблю визуальные новеллы, тащусь по рыцарям и раньше увлекалась писательством, пока что всё выглядит бесподобно! автор продолжай в том же духе :)
(RUS)
i can't wait for the other rooms, i am obsessed with sir knight.... i need him
I REALLY need the other two rooms, I want so badly to play with the angel and the clown, I hope they don't take too long because I want to see their designs! 😭
I really hope there is a Chinese translation :P
PLEASE WRITE MORE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
jokes aside, awesome stuff, was distracted for a WHILE reading this through.
I arrived thanks to tiktok and now I'm nauseaxe_404's girlfriend, we live a happy life with cuddles and game nights. (I look forward to updates)
how do i open the game on linux
Had a great time playing! Happy I went for the purple room before going to the red room...which was surprisingly 'easier'? Looking forward to the rest!
i need nick so bad
Im courius about our character.
quiero mas!!! me encanta!
soundtrack is so SILLYYY i love it sm
NauseAxe_404 is the babygirliest babygirl ever, I love him. He did kill me a couple of times but everybody does that sometimes! AHA...aha....ah.... no, maybe nobody does. HE IS STILL POOKIE TO ME!
Can't wait to play more when the other two rooms will be available! Another game I'm excited to see the future of!
A knight with a biker helmet and a assault rifle ?!
I'M IN LOVE WITH THE SOUNDTRACK!1!11!1!1!1!1!1!!!!1!!!!
this looks very fun... my friend rec it to me but ill have to try and dodge the warning
update: i need to wife up sir knight
so real for this
frfrfrfrfrfrfrfrfrfrfrfrfr
For the knight referring to it as- dislikes: equality; is wild
Oh my god this game is SO GOOD, I am obsessed with 404 in particular. He is just so cute!
how do i download this game on my macbook bc all that shows up is a anime girl and when i click on her it says its not verified and i have to put it in the trash 😔
You have to open the location of the file on the finder and right click it and press open>open and you should be able to run it
i need NauseAxe_404 in a pink barbie dress
The angelic soundtrack at room 004 almost made me fall out of my chair.. or maybe ascend??
The music had me boppin almost throughout and I'm lowkey just waiting on the other rooms lmao
Ok. I have quite a bit to say.
This game is good. I'm gonna be a bit negative in this review, but I need to make it clear that I quite liked the experience here. It's nice, the monsters feel genuine and they're fun to play around with. In that vein, I don't really have anything to complain about 001's route. It's just a good time.
004 tho. Yeah. I have some things to get off my chest, it wasn't good. The route is long, and the ending doesn't really feel as satisfying as it could have been. Allow me to elaborate: the buildup is weird. It's long, and the knight is a bit *too* trigger happy. This isn't really a problem on it's own, but coming off from the sweet and short 001 it is quite jarring just how much harder 004 is. This isn't a big problem on it's own, but there is also the payoff of all that buildup, where it is revealed that you are a reincarnation (I think?) of the knight's master. The issue? What was the point of everything else if you were just the master all along.
Your choices didn't really matter here up to this point, past the ending it felt like you as a player is just thrown from one scene into the other until the game decides that you have won the lottery and you're actually his master. In a game that markets itself with "from blackmailing to flirting anything is fair game" you have surprisingly little say on how to deal with him. It would be better if you could convince him through helping him process the death of his master, or through a newfound passion for cooking, or - here's an idea - instead of straight up killing you when you make a perfect armor maybe it would send you down another route where you gaslight him into thinking you're the master when you're really not. It would be better if the sword was scrapped altogether, just *something* to make you feel like you did something, that makes you feel like, you know, an actual mediator. For now, the lingering aftertaste that the chapter leaves in your mouth is that you got lucky, and luck doesn't really feel good.
Both monsters so far have been solved mostly through who you are rather than something you do. For 001 I can forgive it, since he doesn't really overstay his welcome and it's playing into a very specific fantasy, but it should be a one off thing. Unless there is another route for the knight I'm not aware (and if there is, please tell me), it being solved the same way makes me worried for the game's future and the direction it is going. I bring this up because there is a lot of potential here, again this is not a bad game by any means. But it can be improved. I hope you take this the best way possible, but 004 is frustrating when it didn't really need to be.
Uhhh yeah. Best of luck.
thank you for your feedback! and don't worry any criticism is welcome especially if it's respectful like yours, most of your feedback if not all of it stems from the fact i create the games the way i want them to (in a selfish way you could say), i write and create the dialogue and options according to whatever my brain wants to do at the moment, the result can vary in terms of how other players will experience the route, you're also not the first one to get frustrated with 004s route after playing 001, i did make Sir Knight harder on purpose, although he's supposed to be the 2nd hardest (404 < Angel < Sir Knight < The Clown), i know i probably should have done the angel first then but i really really wanted to make him lmao, i was in the 004 zone ✨
for the other feedback in terms of story i don't plan on changing anything since it'll all come together at the end (the fact that mc seems to always have some sort of connection to all of the monsters, but ill make a post about that on twitter at some point once I continue with the angel), your own proposals wouldn't fit canon 004 at all tbh (although you can headcanon whatever you want ofc), and I don't write my characters and stories according to what i believe would be most enjoyable to play through, but what i personally wanna see in the game, so future routes and games might still be frustrating in that regard especially because everyone has their own preferences, either way im always open for feedback or criticism because some feedback HAS changed how i go about things (feedback for my TWs for example hehe), and regardless of whether i change anything im always curious to hear what people feel after playing my games, good and bad
thank you ill kiss your liver <3
con el caballero morí tantas veces que cada que hablaba me resigne a morir, cuando ya no me mato, me sentí un tanto rara XD, estaba como: a caray no me mori? de hecho hasta me decepcione :v pero también fui feliz cuando llegue viva al final :D
Anyone else having a problem getting Sir Knight out of his room?
He was my first choice in first playthrough, gotta say you're not alone at all.